There are numerous instances of informal pronouns within the document, they need to be changed before submitting to ISO.

We:
Sec 4 pg 2 para 2
Sec 10.1 pg 11 para 1, para 3
Sec 10.3 pg 12 para 1
Sec 12.5 pg 24 para 2 (2)
Sec 12.5 pg 25 para 2
Sec 12.6.2 pg 29 para 1 (3)
Sec 12.7 pg 30 para 4 (2)
Sec 16.1 pg 39 para 2, para 3
Sec B.3 pg 43
Sec B.4 pg 43
Sec B.5 pg 43 (2)

Our:
Sec 10.1 pg 11 para 3
Sec 16.1 pg 39 para 2
Sec B.5 pg 43

Fix informal pronouns to prepare for ISO Submission

Minimally invasive languages changes here, any further changes that collide with this will be dealt with as needed.

Any changes required for meeting style and organizational requirements for OMG and ISO formatting.

This issue should generate NO CONTENT CHANGES. No change should be included here that alters the meaning of the specification, only the formatting and document structure.

Any changes that may alter the interpretation of the material (italicization, camelCaps, etc) need to be addressed in their own issue(s).

Add any identified issues as comments below for the moment.

Administrative editorial changes

These proposed changes are strictly editorial in nature and do not change the meaning or intent of any text within the specification. If anyone notices something that they feel would change the interpretation or meaning of anything, please raise a concern immediately so it can be resolved.

The definitions in Terms & Definitions need to be reworked not so much for content, but for formatting. See both ISO / IEC 2018 Directivess Part 2, 2018 Clause 16, as well as Nick Stavros' EBC review of SPMS 1.3 June 5 2024.

New 'in place substitution' appropriate definitions need to be written, with the existing text bumped to Note status in some cases.

Update definitions to ISO format

Mostly formatting oriented, this will require some changes to the actual text.

Subclauses 12.3 and 12.6 have hanging paragraphs (content between the title and the first subsubclause). These are not allowed by ISO, and need to be resolved before PAS submission. This will renumber the subsequent subsubclauses and may require changing references to them elsewhere.

Resolve Hanging Paragraphs in 12.3 and 12.6

Place hanging material in 12.3 and 12.6 into 12.3.1 and 12.6.1 respectively, triggering renumbering of subsequent subclauses.
Update references to these subclauses as needed.

There are four equations in the document, none are numbered. Consider numbering them for more clear reference.

Clause 8.1 pg 7, para 3, 5
Clause 9.1 pg 10, para 3, 5

No change to numbering equations

There are four equations that are candidates for numbering:
Clause 8.1 pg 7, para 3, 5
Clause 9.1 pg 10, para 3, 5

None are referenced elsewhere.

ISO / IEC Directives, Part 2, Clause 27.3 states:
"If needed for cross-referencing purposes, mathematical formulae can be numbered in a document."

Since these are not cross-referenced, no numbering is required.

Clause 5 Symbols is empty, only a declaration that the document defines none.

By both OMG and ISO requirements this is unnecessary.

Deleting this Clause, will, however, renumber the remainder of the document, making tracking of other issues more difficult.

Delete Clause 5 - APPLY LAST

Delete Clause 5 as unnecessary.

Since this will trigger a renumbering of the remainder of the document, apply this fix LAST to help with issue tracking.