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  1. OMG Issue

SPMS14 — Convert I/we/us/you to more formal language

  • Key: SPMS14-1
  • Status: open  
  • Source: Object Management Group ( Dr. Jason McC. Smith)
  • Summary:

    There are numerous instances of informal pronouns within the document, they need to be changed before submitting to ISO.

    We:
    Sec 4 pg 2 para 2
    Sec 10.1 pg 11 para 1, para 3
    Sec 10.3 pg 12 para 1
    Sec 12.5 pg 24 para 2 (2)
    Sec 12.5 pg 25 para 2
    Sec 12.6.2 pg 29 para 1 (3)
    Sec 12.7 pg 30 para 4 (2)
    Sec 16.1 pg 39 para 2, para 3
    Sec B.3 pg 43
    Sec B.4 pg 43
    Sec B.5 pg 43 (2)

    Our:
    Sec 10.1 pg 11 para 3
    Sec 16.1 pg 39 para 2
    Sec B.5 pg 43

  • Reported: SPMS 1.3b1 — Fri, 24 Jan 2025 08:09 GMT
  • Updated: Mon, 27 Jan 2025 06:39 GMT