XMI24 — The text should be reviewed for clarity and objectivity and then amended

The technical intent of the document is reasonably clear, and it appears to have been used for several effective implementations. The presentation of the material in the document is a long way from the ISO/IEC format, which is permitted for the first version of a standard introduced by the JTC1 PAS process, but there are a number of places where small changes would bring it closer to what users of ISO/IEC standards usually expect. There are also a number of places where the text is unclear or does not make obvious sense.
Large tracts of motivational and background material tend to obscure the normative specifications. The text should be reviewed for clarity and objectivity, and then suitably amended before it is further considered for progression to IS.

The proposed change is not sufficiently detailed to be actionable..
Disposition: Close No Change