DDSIRTP23 — Editing issues

1. Section: 8.3.6.3, Bullet 2 and Footnote 2
Page: 43
Change: PROTOCOL_RTPS is not defined by PSM

2. Section: 8.3.7.3.2, Table 8.35
Page: 50
Change: KeyFlag is missing from the table

3. Section: 8.3.7.3.2, Table 8.35
Page: 51
Change: Remove the line "Present only if DataFlag is set in the header", as DataFrag has no such flag. Remove the line "Present only if either the DataFlag or the KeyFlag are set in the header", as DataFrag has no DataFlag. In the first bullet point replace "If the DataFlag is set" with "If the KeyFlag is not set".

4. Section: 8.4.1
Page: 63
Change: Section 8.4.13 (Writer Liveliness) is missing from this list.

5. Section: 8.4.7.2
Page: 75
Change: The paragraph above the table should be changed from using Locator_t to ReaderLocator (the table was changed in a previous revision).

6. Section: 8.4.7.2.2, 8.4.7.2.3
Page: 76
Change: Locator_t in these sections should be ReaderLocator

7. Section: 8.4.7.3, Table 8.51
Page: 77
Change: In figure 8.15, type of locator is Locator_t[*] but the [*] is missing from this table (8.51) and the text should reflect the actual cardinality

8. Section: 8.4.9.2
Page: 93
Change: The sentence fragment "Submessages are used..." is nonsensical, it should be removed.

9. Section: 8.5.3.3, Figure 8.29
Page: 129
Change: Remove figure 8.29, it is a duplicate of figure 8.28

10. Section: 9.4.5.3, block diagram
Page: 170
Change: Flag "K" is missing from the flags byte

11. Section: 9.6.2.1
Page: 180
Change: The wire-representation diagram is missing the participantGuidPrefix and kind fields (also see OMG Issue 12501)

12. Section: 9.6.2.2, Table 9.10
Page: 182
Change: remoteWriterGuid belongs to WriterProxy, not ReaderProxy

13. Section: 9.6.2.2, Table 9.10
Page: 182
Change: Table 9.10 caption is incorrect, looks like it was copied from 9.11

14. Section: 9.6.3.2, Table 9.16
Page: 190
Change: KeyHashSuffix does not exist; remove this row from the table. The row for SerializedData should be sufficient to describe the use of PID_COHERENT_SET.

Fix Editorial Issues

There are a number of minor editorial issues that need to fixed. This issue was created to resolve them.