UML25 — Suggestions for editorial changes

Reading the document cited, I noticed some editorial errors. Thus, below you will find some suggestions for editorial changes.

• Page 23, Section 8.3.2, first sentence: Instead of "are enumerated", it should probably read "is enumerated".

• Page 48, section 9.8.3, subsection titled "Associations": Instead of "owning expression. Subsets", it should probably read "owning expression subsets".

• Page 96, section 10.2.1, subsection titled "Semantics", second paragraph, first sentence: Instead of "features on another class", it should probably read "features of another class".

• Page 98, section 10.2.5, subsection titled "Attributes", last bullet point, last sentence: Instead of "Default value", it should read "The default value".

• Page 111, section 11.3.1, first paragraph, second and third sentences: A space character is missing between the two sentences.

• Page 113, section 11.3.1, subsection titled "Semantics", sixth paragraph, first sentence: Instead of "characterized", it should read "characterizes".

• Page 151, section 11.7.5, subsection titled "Examples": Instead of "imported WebShop", it should read "imported to WebShop".

• Page 154, section 11.8.2, subsection titled "Constraints". Instead of "n operation", it should read "An operation".

• Page 173, section 12, second paragraph, fifth paragraph: Instead of "profile?s", it should read "profile's".

• Page 173, section 12, first numbered paragraph, last sentence: Instead of "more constraining", it should read "more constraining than".

• Page 178, section 12.1.2, subsection titled "Semantics", first paragraph, last sentence: Instead of "at most", it should (probably?) read "at least".

• Page 186, section 12.1.7, subsection titled "Semantics", last paragraph on page, last sentence: Instead of "and or", it should read "and/or".

• Page 191, section 12.1.8, subsection titled "Semantics", first paragraph, fourth and fifth sentences: There seems to be a mistake on the boundary between the two sentences ("all its nested and imported."); probably, something is missing at the end of the fourth sentence after "imported".

• Page 194, section 12.1.9, subsection titled "Semantics", third paragraph on page, second sentence: Instead of "theses stereotypes", it should read "these sstereotypes".

• Page 194, section 12.1.9, subsection titled "Notation", third paragraph, first sentence: Instead of "stereotype?s", it should read "stereotype's".

• Page 195, section 12.1.9, subsection titled "Presentation Options", first sentence on page: Instead of "may shown", it should read "may be shown".

• Page 196, section 12.1.9, subsection titled "Examples", last paragraph on page, second sentence: Before "isRequired", opening quotation marks are missing.

This issue has already been resolved by, or no longer applies to, the UML 2.5 Beta 1 specification.
Disposition: Closed - No Change