UML22 — Section: 17.2.2

Not all of the sub-package names given in the sub-section Generalizations are shown in fig. 413. Add them or ellipses. Change capitalization of "information Item" and "Information Items" in sub-section Description to agree. If Information Item is an abstraction shouldn't the name appear in italics in fig. 413? Change last sent. of para 1, sub-section Description to "...for representing information in a very abstract way, one which cannot be instantiated." Change "taken" to "made" in first sent. of para 2 of Descriptions. Delete sub-section Attributes or change wording to "None." Add OCL notation to constraints [1] and [2] or a note that OCL notation is not available. Constraint [1] contains an enumeration list but this is not diagrammed as part of fig. 413. The constraint reads like a guard whose condition is that the InformationItem can only be of the enumerationKind listed in the constraint. Why not diagram it that way? Typos - 1st sent., Para 2 of sub-section Semantics, change "item" to "items." - 2nd sent., Para 3 of sub-section Semantics, reword to "specifying this detailed information belongs to the represented classifier." Question - Why is the multiplicity in fig. 418 0..1? Suggest removing all multiplicities from diag. 418 as they add nothing to it.

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