UML22 — Section: 11.1

Typos and rewording requests Basic Concepts para 2 - Change "Behavior" to "Behaviors" Basic Concepts para 3 - Change "Operations" to "Operation calls" Intermediate Concepts para 1 sentence 1 - change "various action primitive actions" to "various primitive actions" Intermediate Concepts para 1 sentence 3 - rewrite to something like: S"pecifically, a single primitive action is defined so that it either carries out a computation or accesses object memory, but never both." Intermediate Concepts para 6 sentence 4 - Add verb in "multiplicity bound ignored" to "multiplicity bound is ignored" Intermediate Concepts para 6 last sentence - replace the pronoun "these" with the appropriate noun - I don't know if "these" refers to the points where the lower multiplicity bound is ignored or the points where the modeler has determined that the lower multiplicity bound is enforced. Intermediate Actions, Read Write Actions (page 230) para 3 sentence 1 - needs rewording: "ranging from" implies a "to" something which is not listed; "implementation-dependent" is a modifiying phrase but I don't know what it is modifying (the following comma may not be needed). My interpretation of the sentence meaning is: "Value specificationc cover various expressions ranging from implementation-dependent constants to complex expressions with possible side-effects."

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