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  1. OMG Issue

KDM12 — p.45 (p. 23) The explanation of Figure 9.4 (paragraph) right after Figure 9.4 needs work

  • Key: KDM12-30
  • Legacy Issue Number: 12891
  • Status: closed  
  • Source: Office of the Secretary of Defense ( Larry Wagoner)
  • Summary:

    p.45 (p. 23) The explanation of Figure 9.4 (paragraph) right after Figure 9.4 needs work. There are no arrows in the figure,
    contrary to the explanation in the paragraph. Would be helpful to tie the paragraph more to the figure, e.g. instead of
    "UML package symbols represent KDM Containers..." state "UML package symbols C1 and C2 represent KDM Containers..."
    and instead of "Numbers at the ends of associations..." state "the numbers at the ends of associations, such as +2,..."

    Also, "interpretation that UML multiplicity" needs fixing – not sure what the sentence should read.

  • Reported: KDM 1.1 — Wed, 24 Sep 2008 04:00 GMT
  • Disposition: Resolved — KDM 1.2
  • Disposition Summary:

    Page 21 replace “AggregatedRelations are” into “AggregatedRelationship is”
    Page 22 top, bullet 4, replace “AggregatedRelation” into “AggregatedRelatiopnship”
    Page 22 Replace “The relation “x in* C” with “The relationship “x in* C”
    Replace “For relation R … corresponding aggregated relation” with “For relationship R…
    corresponding aggregated relationship”
    Next line replace “relation R, let” into “relationship R, let”
    Replace “C1 and C2 are related by the aggregated relation” with “C1 and C2 are related by the
    aggregated relationship”
    Change caption of Figure 9.4 into “AggregatedRelationships illustrated
    Replace “Containers and aggregated relations” into “Containers and aggregated relationships”
    Page 22, text after figure 9.4. replace “UML package symbols represent KDM containers” into
    “UML package symbols C1 and C2 represent KDM containers”
    Replace “Numbers at the ends of associations” into “The numbers at the ends of associations,
    such as “+2” ”
    Replace “relation (there should be at least one arrow; arrows at both ends indicate two relations,
    one in each direction)” into “relationship, when there are no arrows at either end of the
    association (as in the Figure 9.4), this indicates two relationships, one in each direction.”
    Replace “The KDM density has a different interpretation that UML multiplicity” into “The KDM
    density has a different interpretation than UML multiplicity”
    Replace “the exact relations” into “the exact relationships”
    Replace “Aggregated relations are collections of more primitive relations” into “Aggregated
    relationships are collections of primitive relationships”
    Line 2 from bottom replace “code relation” into “code relationship”
    Page 23 line 1 replace “aggregated relation” into “aggregated relationship”
    Line 2 replace “aggregated relation” into “aggregated relationship”
    Line 3 “primitive relations” into “primitive relationships”
    In createAggregation operation replace “aggregated relation” into “aggregated relationship”

  • Updated: Fri, 6 Mar 2015 20:57 GMT