IEF-RA 1.0 FTF Avatar
  1. OMG Issue

IEFRA_ — change in wording 2

  • Key: IEFRA_-90
  • Status: closed  
  • Source: Advanced Systems Management Group Ltd. ( Mr. Michael Abramson)
  • Summary:

    IEFRA-21

    Change
    “These diagrams are not intended to prescribe the operations of the each component, which will be documented in a separate specification, E.g.:”
    in Annex D to read
    “These diagrams are not intended to prescribe the operations of the each component that is documented in a separate specification, e.g.:”

    2nd bullet: change “The PPS that will be defined” to “The PPS defined”

    Is this sentence needed? Perhaps better not to imply frequent changes will be needed.
    “This Reference Architecture will be updated to reflect change imposed by the individual component specifications.”

    Change
    “The choices in the selection of components and specifications will guide the sequencing of activities within and between the components.”
    To
    “The choices in the selection of components and specifications guide the sequencing of activities within and between the components.”

    Change in 3 places:
    “Many of these considerations will be addressed”
    to
    “Many of these considerations are addressed”

  • Reported: IEF-RA 1.0b1 — Sat, 29 Dec 2018 03:03 GMT
  • Disposition: Deferred — IEF-RA 1.0
  • Disposition Summary:

    *Required Editorial Change to IEF-RA proposal *

    Deferred to RTF - the documents have been submitted - and a stable version is required for NAT0 evaluation and Testing in June

    Requires minor correction for typographical errors

  • Updated: Tue, 8 Oct 2019 17:56 GMT