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IEFRA_ — Amend IEFRA-31 issues

  • Key: IEFRA_-162
  • Status: closed  
  • Source: Advanced Systems Management Group Ltd. ( Mr. Michael Abramson)
  • Summary:

    #31
    Have gone thru the proposed revised section and recommend the following:
    Within Sxn 2.3 - "Figure 2 outlines a generalized architecture including call four information sharing types, including the two forms of Structured messaging integration."

    "call four" should be "all four"

    Within Sxn 2.4 -
    "Figure 3 illustrates the integration patterns IEF elements utilizing the IEF as a set of proxy information sharing and safeguarding services where the client application and a corresponding server are provided on the users’ own network and security domain."
    Should be:
    Figure 3 illustrates the integration patterns whereby IEF elements utilize IEF as a set of proxy information sharing and safeguarding services and client application and a corresponding server are provided on the users’ own network and security domain.

    Also "This often means that the User Client application must include or integrated with..."

    Insert a "be" before "integrated"

    In Sxn 2.6.1, am thinking that in "selective sharing of structured data, as messages," – ", as messages," could be either ", treated as messages," or ", i.e., messages," given that I believe this is the intent. The other way to apporach this is ", packaged as messages," – which would be consistent with the usage in the next paragraph.

    Sxn 2.6.2
    "File information sharing and safeguarding compliance requires a PEP is tailored..." add a "that" in front of "is tailored"
    also – "authorized to request the operation" – should be "an operation"

    Sxn 2.6.3 and 2.6.4
    same as 2.6.2 – replace "is tailored" with "that is tailored"

  • Reported: IEF-RA 1.0b1 — Fri, 8 Mar 2019 01:25 GMT
  • Disposition: Duplicate or Merged — IEF-RA 1.0
  • Disposition Summary:

    *Duplicate of *

    Accidentally added this issue twice

  • Updated: Tue, 8 Oct 2019 17:56 GMT