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Key: ESSENCE2-8
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Status: open
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Source: Jackrabbit Consulting ( Dr. Robert (Nick) Stavros)
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Summary:
Issue
The text is cumbersome and awkward. It uses past tense and passive voice and does not read well.
- https://issues.omg.org/browse/ESSENCE2-2
- https://issues.omg.org/browse/ESSENCE2-3
- https://issues.omg.org/browse/ESSENCE2-5
Original Text
• Provide a common base that is useful for engineering endeavors of all sizes (small, medium, and large) and that can easily be extended without changing or complicating the kernel.
Suggested Text
• Provide a common base useful for engineering endeavors of all sizes (small, medium, and large), which is easily extensible without changing or complicating the kernel.
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Reported: Essence 2.0b1 — Wed, 14 Aug 2024 20:43 GMT
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Updated: Mon, 9 Sep 2024 16:10 GMT