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Key: ESSENCE2-6
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Status: open
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Source: Jackrabbit Consulting ( Dr. Robert (Nick) Stavros)
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Summary:
Isuues
The following text may need refinement, uses the passive voice, and uses the past tense.
- https://issues.omg.org/browse/ESSENCE2-3
- https://issues.omg.org/browse/ESSENCE2-2
- https://issues.omg.org/browse/ESSENCE2-5
Original Text
They allow people to describe the essentials of their existing and future methods and practices so that they can be compared, evaluated, tailored, used, adapted, simulated, and measured by practitioners as well as taught and researched by academics and researchers.
Suggestion:
They allow people to describe the essentials of their existing and future methods and practices. They also allow for the comparison, evaluation, tailoring, usage, adaptation, simulation, and measurement by practitioners and being taught and investigated by academics and researchers.
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Reported: Essence 2.0b1 — Wed, 14 Aug 2024 20:24 GMT
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Updated: Mon, 9 Sep 2024 16:12 GMT