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Key: ESSENCE2-25
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Status: open
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Source: Jackrabbit Consulting ( Dr. Robert (Nick) Stavros)
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Summary:
Issues
The following text is cumbersome and awkward, uses the passive voice, and uses the past tense.
- https://issues.omg.org/browse/ESSENCE2-2 - Passive Voice
Original Text
In the solution area of concern the team has to be able to capture and analyze the requirements, and build and operate a system that fulfills them. This requires the following competencies to be available to the team:
Suggestion
In the solution area of concern, the team needs to capture and analyze the requirements and build and operate a system that fulfills them. This necessitates the following competencies being available to the team:
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Reported: Essence 2.0b1 — Thu, 15 Aug 2024 23:02 GMT
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Updated: Fri, 16 Aug 2024 23:59 GMT