ESSENCE2 — Clarity

Issues

Content

In the text it says:

Note: other kernels for other domains could be defined using the Essence Language, but these are outside the scope of this specification.

Question: Aren't all domains outside the newly defined Engineering Essence scope versus the original Software Essence proposed?

Grammatical

The following text is cumbersome and awkward, uses the passive voice, and uses the past tense.

• https://issues.omg.org/browse/ESSENCE2-5 - Streamline text

Original Text

• The Essence Kernel captures the essential elements of engineering, those that are integral to all engineering methods. Note: other kernels for other domains could be defined using the Essence Language but these are outside the scope of this specification.

Suggestion

• The Essence Kernel captures essential engineering elements integral to all engineering methods. Note: other kernels for other domains could be defined using the Essence Language, but these are outside the scope of this specification.