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  1. OMG Issue

ESSENCE2 — Cumbersome and awkward text

  • Key: ESSENCE2-13
  • Status: open  
  • Source: Jackrabbit Consulting ( Dr. Robert (Nick) Stavros)
  • Summary:

    Issues

    The following text is cumbersome and awkward, uses the passive voice, and uses the past tense.

    Original Text

    • Support method agility, so that practices and methods can be refined and modified during a project to reflect experiences, lessons learned, and changing needs.

    Suggestion

    • Support method agility so practices and methods are refinable and modifiable during a project lifecycle, reflecting experiences, lessons learned, and changing needs.
  • Reported: Essence 2.0b1 — Wed, 14 Aug 2024 21:08 GMT
  • Updated: Sun, 8 Sep 2024 18:18 GMT