ESSENCE2 — Refine Language -5

Issues

The following text is cumbersome and awkward, uses the passive voice, and uses the past tense.

• https://issues.omg.org/browse/ESSENCE2-3 - Present Tense
• https://issues.omg.org/browse/ESSENCE2-5 - Streamline text

Original Text

• Separate the method support that different types of user are interested in to make methods useful for, and accessible to, everyone involved in engineering. For example, process engineers are usually more interested in methodology aspects but their interest should not overload developers, analysts, testers, team leaders, and project managers.

Suggestion

• Separate the method supporting different types of users interested in making methods useful for and accessible to everyone involved in engineering. For example, process engineers usually have an interest in methodology aspects, but their interest should not overload developers, analysts, testers, team leaders, and project managers.