DDSXTY13 — Further corrections

7.2.1.1 (Type Evolution Example) pg 13 first para

> [ ...] However, not all components that publish or subscribe data of this
> type will be upgraded to this new definition of VehicleLocationType
> (or if they will not be upgraded, they will not be upgraded at the same
> time)

• (or if they will be upgraded, they will not be upgraded at the same time)

7.2.1.3 (Sparse Types Example) pg 14 first para

> [...] In its local programming language (say, C++ or Java), the
> application can assign a pointer to null to omit a value for these fields.

• the application can assign null to a pointer to omit [...]

7.2.2.2 (Primitive Types) pg 18 Table 3 description for INT_16_TYPE

> Signed integer minimally capable of representing values in the range
> -32738 to +32737.

• -32768 to 32767.

7.2.2.2.1.2.1 (Use of Unicode) pg 20 fourth para

> [...] The UTF-8 representation ISO-8859-1 characters that are not in the
> ASCII subset uses two 8-bit code units.

• The UTF-8 representation of ISO-8859-1 characters [...]

7.2.2.2.1.2.5 (CHAR_16_TYPE) pg 21 Rationale second para

> [...] Restricting to the BMP ensures that each coodepoint is [...]

• codepoint

7.2.2.7 (Try Construct behavior) pg 42 first para

> [...] Similar to the structure examples there exist be objects of type
> SEQ1024 [...]

• [...] there may exist objects of type SEQ1024 [...]

7.2.4.1 (Constructing objects of one type from objects of another type)
pg 46 Table 13 column "Type compatibility" bottom

> All objects of type T1 can either be used to
> construct an object of type T1 or reliably de-
> tected that that cannot initialize T1. .

Please check - my guess is:

• [...] construct an object of type T2 or it can be
  reliably detected which objects of type T1 cannot initialize T2.

7.2.4.4.5.1 (Example: Strings) pg 49 first para

> [...] If a
> consumer of strings of narrow characters were to attempt to consume
> that string, it might read
> consider the first byte of the first character [...]

• Omit the word "read" :
  [...] were to attempt to consume that string, it might consider [...]

Table 19 (Definition of the is-assignable-from relationship for aggregated types)
pg 53 second column fourth (i.e. last) bullet

> If T1 (and therefore T2)
> extensibility is final then the set of
> labels are identical.

• [...] then the set of labels is identical.

7.3.1.1.1 (Backward Compatibility with Respect to Type Definitions)
pg 60 bullet "Group of Annotations" fourth sub-bullet

> * Code Generation (sub clause 8.3.5 [IDL41]) his specification retains
> well-
> established IDL type definition syntax, such as enumeration, structure,
> union, and
> sequence definitions.

Appears to be a formatting problem, I think the last part of that phrase should be outside and after the end of the bullet enumeration:

• Code Generation (sub clause 8.3.5 [IDL41])

This specification retains well-established IDL type definition syntax, such as enumeration, [...]

7.3.1.2.2 (Using Built-in Annotations) pg 70 first sentence

> The application of the annotations listed above is restricted to the
> elements of specified in Table 21.

• [...] is restricted to the elements of IDL specified in Table 21.

7.3.1.10 (Structure Types) pg 76 first sentence

> Structures as described in this specification are in this specification are
> fully compatible with the IDL constructs of the same name.

• Structures as described in this specification are fully compatible [...]

7.3.1.11 (Union Types) pg 76 first sentence

> Unions as described in this specification are in this specification are
> fully compatible with the IDL constructs of the same name.

• Unions as described in this specification are fully compatible [...]

7.3.2.4.3 (Map Types) pg 80 first bullet

> * The map’s bound, if any, shall be indicated by the mapMaxLength
> attribute. This attribute is required for all map types.

For more fluent reading, I suggest:

• The map's bound shall be indicated by the mapMaxLength attribute.
  This attribute is required for all map types.
  In case of an unbounded map, mapMaxLength shall be set to "-1".

7.3.2.4.3 (Map Types) pg 81 non-normative example:

> <struct name="MyStructure">
> <member name="my_unbounded_maps_of_integers_to_floats"
> type="int32"
> mapKeyType="float32"
> mapMaxLength="-1"/>

The values for "type" and "mapKeyType" are swapped, they should be:

• type="float32"
• mapKeyType="int32"

7.5 (Language Binding) pg 133 top of page (2nd sentence)

> The main characteristics and motivation for each of these binding are
> described in Table 41.

• [...] for each of these bindings are described in Table 41.

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