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DAF — English language correction -- H (On behalf of M. Haus)

  • Key: DAF-26
  • Status: closed  
  • Source: Toyota Motor Corporation ( Naoya Ishizaki)
  • Summary:

    Section 6.2
    "Now, given the fact that SSCD is a system to work for certain function, which aggregates systems to individually work for certain different function,"
    This phrase needs to be clarified. What does "work for a certain function mean"?

  • Reported: DAF 1.0b1 — Fri, 27 Feb 2015 01:48 GMT
  • Disposition: Resolved — DAF 1.0
  • Disposition Summary:

    Proposal to rephrase the sentence

    Original : Section 6.2
    "Now, given the fact that SSCD is a system to work for certain function, which aggregates systems to individually work for certain different function,"

    New : Section 6.2
    "Now, given the fact that SSCD is a system to implement certain function, which aggregates systems to individually implement certain different functions,"

  • Updated: Tue, 22 Dec 2015 15:04 GMT