Convert I/we/us/you to more formal language
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Key: SPMS14-1
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Status: closed
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Source: Object Management Group ( Dr. Jason McC. Smith)
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Summary:
There are numerous instances of informal pronouns within the document, they need to be changed before submitting to ISO.
We:
Sec 4 pg 2 para 2
Sec 10.1 pg 11 para 1, para 3
Sec 10.3 pg 12 para 1
Sec 12.5 pg 24 para 2 (2)
Sec 12.5 pg 25 para 2
Sec 12.6.2 pg 29 para 1 (3)
Sec 12.7 pg 30 para 4 (2)
Sec 16.1 pg 39 para 2, para 3
Sec B.3 pg 43
Sec B.4 pg 43
Sec B.5 pg 43 (2)Our:
Sec 10.1 pg 11 para 3
Sec 16.1 pg 39 para 2
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Reported: SPMS 1.3b1 — Fri, 24 Jan 2025 08:09 GMT
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Disposition: Resolved — SPMS 1.4b1
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Disposition Summary:
Fix informal pronouns to prepare for ISO Submission
Minimally invasive languages changes here, any further changes that collide with this will be dealt with as needed.
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Updated: Tue, 1 Jul 2025 15:03 GMT