WATM — Issue for Telecom Wireless FTF -- EDITORIAL

Chapter 3.1.1.
In paragraphs 2, 3, and wording "returning the object reference of the
Access Bridge" is not precise enough. Instead we should say "returning the
Mobile IOR indicating the Access Bridge".
3rd paragraph, line 4: replace "replies" by "should reply"
4th paragraph, line 3: replace "will reply" by "should reply"

Chapter 3.2.1 IDL of ProfileBody
add space between TerminalObjectKey and teminal_object_key

Page 3-4, 2nd paragraph, line 3: replace "MobileTermial" by "MobileTerminal"

Page 4-2, 1st line: remove "," after "new_access_bridge"

Pages 4-2 and 4-3: replace "UnknownTermialID" by "UnknownTerminalId" (four
times)

Chapter 7.2
Add at the bottom of page 7-2 paragraph: All timeout values are in seconds.

Page 7-5: replace "MobileTeriminal" by "MobileTerminal" (two times)

Page 7-5, last paragraph: The last two line should read as:
"then a handoff procedure or the access recovery procedure as described in
Section 8.2, "Network Initiated Handoff", in Section 8.3, "Terminal
Initiated Handoff", or in Section 8.4, "Access Recovery", is carried out.

Page 7-10, first line: replace
"MobileTerminal::AccessBridgeTransportAddress" by
MobileTerminal::AccessBridgeTransportAddressList"

Page 7-15, second bullet: replace "CLOSE_REASON_RRESOURCE_CONSTRAINT" by
"CLOSE_REASON_RESOURCE_CONSTRAINT"

Page 7-15, third bullet: replace "CLOSE_REASON_RIDLE_CLOSED" by
"CLOSE_REASON_IDLE_CLOSED"

Page 7-15, fourth bullet: replace "CLOSE_REASON_RTIME_TO_LIVE_EXPIRED" by
"CLOSE_REASON_TIME_TO_LIVE_EXPIRED"

Chapter 7.2.17, paret Description, 2nd paragraph: replace "gtp_from
terminal" by gtp_from_terminal"

Chapter 7.5.1, 2nd paragraph: replcae "transmission of unreliable" by
"unreliable transmission"

Chapter 7.5.3, 1st paragraph: add "CDR encapsulation of" at the end of
paragraph

Figure 8-1: replace "location_update" by "update_location"

Chapter 8.3.1, numbered item 5: replace "ReleaseTunnelReuqest" by
"ReleaseTunnelRequest"

Chapter 8.3.2, numbered item 2: replace "location_update" by
"update_location" and "operation" not in bold

Figure 8-2 and 8-3: replace "location_update" by "update_location"

Chapter 8.5, last paragraph, 1st line: replace "an old Access," by "an old
Access Bridge,"

The following editorial changes should be implemented: