1. OMG Issue

WATM — Issue for Telecom Wireless FTF -- EDITORIAL

  • Key: WATM-11
  • Legacy Issue Number: 4625
  • Status: closed  
  • Source: Nokia ( Kimmo Raatikainen)
  • Summary:

    Chapter 3.1.1.
    In paragraphs 2, 3, and wording "returning the object reference of the
    Access Bridge" is not precise enough. Instead we should say "returning the
    Mobile IOR indicating the Access Bridge".
    3rd paragraph, line 4: replace "replies" by "should reply"
    4th paragraph, line 3: replace "will reply" by "should reply"

    Chapter 3.2.1 IDL of ProfileBody
    add space between TerminalObjectKey and teminal_object_key

    Page 3-4, 2nd paragraph, line 3: replace "MobileTermial" by "MobileTerminal"

    Page 4-2, 1st line: remove "," after "new_access_bridge"

    Pages 4-2 and 4-3: replace "UnknownTermialID" by "UnknownTerminalId" (four

    Chapter 7.2
    Add at the bottom of page 7-2 paragraph: All timeout values are in seconds.

    Page 7-5: replace "MobileTeriminal" by "MobileTerminal" (two times)

    Page 7-5, last paragraph: The last two line should read as:
    "then a handoff procedure or the access recovery procedure as described in
    Section 8.2, "Network Initiated Handoff", in Section 8.3, "Terminal
    Initiated Handoff", or in Section 8.4, "Access Recovery", is carried out.

    Page 7-10, first line: replace
    "MobileTerminal::AccessBridgeTransportAddress" by

    Page 7-15, second bullet: replace "CLOSE_REASON_RRESOURCE_CONSTRAINT" by

    Page 7-15, third bullet: replace "CLOSE_REASON_RIDLE_CLOSED" by

    Page 7-15, fourth bullet: replace "CLOSE_REASON_RTIME_TO_LIVE_EXPIRED" by

    Chapter 7.2.17, paret Description, 2nd paragraph: replace "gtp_from
    terminal" by gtp_from_terminal"

    Chapter 7.5.1, 2nd paragraph: replcae "transmission of unreliable" by
    "unreliable transmission"

    Chapter 7.5.3, 1st paragraph: add "CDR encapsulation of" at the end of

    Figure 8-1: replace "location_update" by "update_location"

    Chapter 8.3.1, numbered item 5: replace "ReleaseTunnelReuqest" by

    Chapter 8.3.2, numbered item 2: replace "location_update" by
    "update_location" and "operation" not in bold

    Figure 8-2 and 8-3: replace "location_update" by "update_location"

    Chapter 8.5, last paragraph, 1st line: replace "an old Access," by "an old
    Access Bridge,"

  • Reported: WATM 1.0b1 — Tue, 23 Oct 2001 04:00 GMT
  • Disposition: Resolved — WATM 1.0
  • Disposition Summary:

    The following editorial changes should be implemented:

  • Updated: Fri, 6 Mar 2015 20:51 GMT