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VDML12 — Rephrase grammatically incorrect sentence

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  • Key: VDML12-2
  • Status: open  
  • Source: DXC Technology ( Pavel Hruby)
  • Summary:

    Right under Figure 8-63, we can read: "Revision of includes adding a property influence to MeasureRelationship (the class in SMM that “types” MeasurementRelationships)."

    This sentence is hard to understand and is probably not correct grammatically, either.
    I suggest to rewrite, such as:
    "MeasureRelationship (the class in SMM that “types” MeasurementRelationships) has a property influence."

  • Reported: VDML 1.1b1 — Wed, 17 Jul 2019 16:52 GMT
  • Updated: Wed, 17 Jul 2019 18:09 GMT