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UMLR — Grammatical improvement is needed in the descriptions (p. 342)

  • Key: UMLR-834
  • Status: open  
  • Source: N/A ( Robert Hairgrove)
  • Summary:

    On page 342 of the PDF file at section 13.4.11.4, there is a bit of "anguished English":

    • event : Event [1..1] (opposite A_event_trigger::trigger)
      The Event that detected by the Trigger.

    and

    • port : Port [0..*] (opposite A_port_trigger::trigger)
      A optional Port of through which the given effect is detected.

    Suggested improvements:

    "The Event that is detected by the Trigger" or simply: "The Event detected by the Trigger";

    "A*n* optional Port of through which the given effect is detected."

  • Reported: UML 2.5.1 — Thu, 25 Jul 2024 07:44 GMT
  • Updated: Fri, 9 Aug 2024 17:05 GMT