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Key: UMLR-834
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Status: open
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Source: N/A ( Robert Hairgrove)
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Summary:
On page 342 of the PDF file at section 13.4.11.4, there is a bit of "anguished English":
- event : Event [1..1] (opposite A_event_trigger::trigger)
The Event that detected by the Trigger.
and
- port : Port [0..*] (opposite A_port_trigger::trigger)
A optional Port of through which the given effect is detected.
Suggested improvements:
"The Event that is detected by the Trigger" or simply: "The Event detected by the Trigger";
"A*n* optional Port
ofthrough which the given effect is detected." - event : Event [1..1] (opposite A_event_trigger::trigger)
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Reported: UML 2.5.1 — Thu, 25 Jul 2024 07:44 GMT
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Updated: Fri, 9 Aug 2024 17:05 GMT
UMLR — Grammatical improvement is needed in the descriptions (p. 342)
- Key: UMLR-834
- OMG Task Force: UML 2.6 RTF