UML241 — UML Appendix A : Figure A.3 Two Diagrams of Packages”

In “Figure A.3 Two Diagrams of Packages” the left most diagram has a header that says:

“i) Package symbol (as part of a larger diagram diagram)”

This text should be (as far as I can figure out)

“i) Package symbol (as part of a larger package diagram)”

Similarly, the paragraph before the diagram has the following text

“Figure A.3 illustrates that a package symbol for package P (in some containing package CP) may show the same contents as the class diagram for the package. i) is a diagram for package CP with graphical symbols representing the fact that the CP package contains a package P.”

To clarify this, make the following one word change

“Figure A.3 illustrates that a package symbol for package P (in some containing package CP) may show the same contents as the class diagram for the package. i) is a package diagram for package CP with graphical symbols representing the fact that the CP package contains a package P.”

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