IEFRA2 — IEF RA Design Principles

12. Section: 1.8 IEF RA Design Principles
12.1 Spelling & Grammar Issues:
(1) No major spelling errors, but a few minor inconsistencies and phrasing issues:
(2) Inconsistent use of "IEF RA" vs. "IEF-RA" –The document should standardize on one format.
"IEF-RA" appears more frequently and aligns with previous sections, so that should be used throughout.
(3) Typo in "open standard based s policy vocabularies"
"open standard based s policy vocabularies" → "open standards-based policy vocabularies"
(4) Phrasing refinement for clarity and reduced ambiguity:
Sentence: "Automating the enforcement of user-defined information sharing and safeguarding at the data level."
Suggest: “Automating enforcement of user-defined information sharing and safeguarding policies at the data level."
(Adds "policies" to make it clear what is being enforced.)
(5) Sentence: "Delivering operational flexibility, adaptability, and agility.
Suggest: “A"Ensuring operational flexibility, adaptability, and agility in information-sharing environments."
(Clarifies the intent.)