IEFRA2 — Clarity Sec 1.4

"4.1.4 Clarity
We want to be clear as to how IEF works with networks or platforms, it sounds as if from the wording that IEF doesn't work with networks or platforms.
Sentence: ""The IEF Reference Architecture defines an integration layer for open standards, off-the-shelf products, and services to enforce ISS policy at the data level rather than the networks, platforms, systems, and applications.""
Suggest: ""The IEF Reference Architecture defines an integration layer that enables policy enforcement at the data level, complementing traditional security controls applied at the network, platform, system, and application levels."""