IEFRA2 — AC Features

3.3.2 Weak Explanation of Conventional Access Control Failures
It's not entirely clear whether the section is referring to network/system-level access controls or file/data-level access controls. The phrase "once a user gains access, they may have broad, unchecked access to data" could be interpreted as referring to file permissions, shared drives, or database access, rather than network/system access.
Suggest:
"Traditional access control models primarily enforce security at the network or system level, restricting access at the perimeter but offering limited control over individual data elements. Once a user gains entry to a secured environment—such as a classified network, a protected enclave, or a shared system—they often receive broad, unchecked access to vast amounts of information. This approach lacks the fine-grained policy enforcement required for modern, dynamic multi-organization environments, where trust relationships and security requirements shift based on mission needs and real-time risk factors.'