IEFRA2 — Suggestions for Readability

1.5 Minor Suggestions for Readability
Sentence: “Whether addressing insider threats (above) or the growing risks and costs associated with data breaches5,6, Decision-makers worldwide are seeking new and innovative ways to balance the requirement to share information and simultaneously protect sensitive data assets.”

Issue: wordiness

Suggest: “Decision-makers worldwide seek innovative ways to balance information sharing while protecting sensitive data assets.”