IEFRA2 — Ambiguous Phrasing Section 1.4

1.4 Ambiguous Phrasing
Sentence: “Organizations conducting these missions and operations require the ability to share sensitive information (e.g., private, confidential, legally significant, and classified) securely with other agencies, other levels of government, and international and private sector
partners.”

Issue: The phrase "other agencies, other levels of government" is slightly awkward.

Suggest: “Organizations conducting these operations must securely share sensitive information (e.g., private, confidential, legally significant, and classified) with agencies, different levels of government, and international and private sector partners.”