IEFRA2 — IEF in Data Centricity, Digitization, and Digital Transformation

"21. Section: 1.10.5 IEF in Data Centricity, Digitization, and Digital Transformation
21.1 Spelling & Grammar Issues:
● ""exiting operations"" → Should be ""existing operations"" (under Digitalization).
● ""Enterprise data, information systems, and workloads are siloed or enclaved"" → ""Enclaved"" is uncommon; consider ""compartmentalized"" or ""isolated.""
● ""To enable the efficient and effective use of enterprise data,"" → Consider ""To facilitate the efficient and effective utilization of enterprise data.""
● ""Maximize the availability of quality information to decision-makers and"" → Consider ""Maximize access to high-quality information for decision-makers.""
● ""Increase the speed of the mission"" → Consider ""Accelerate mission execution.""
● ""Continue the evolution of data-centric capabilities"" → ""Continue evolving data-centric capabilities"" would be more natural."