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  1. OMG Issue

IEFRA2 — Inconsistencies between text and Figure

  • Key: IEFRA2-149
  • Status: open  
  • Source: Advanced Systems Management Group Ltd. ( Mr. Michael Abramson)
  • Summary:

    "20.1.7 Inconsistencies between text and Figure
    Zero-Trust Computing
    The figure labels it correctly in the top right but does not visually connect it to the rest of the flow.
    Consider clarifying its role in the diagram.
    ""Secure Data Service Configuration"" vs. ""Secure Data Service""
    The text refers to ""Secure Data Service Configuration (Section 1.12.6),"" but the figure uses ""Secure Data Service.""
    Suggest: Ensure consistency—either adjust the text to match ""Secure Data Service"" or update the figure if ""Secure Data Service Configuration"" is the correct terminology.
    ""PEP"" vs. ""Security Services""
    The text mentions PEPs (Policy Enforcement Points) as a key enforcement mechanism, but the figure has ""Security Services (ICAM, ABAC, Crypto, Key Mgt, monitoring, logging...)"" in the bottom right.
    Suggest: If PEP is a core enforcement mechanism, it should be clearly represented in the figure.
    ""Unsecured / Unclassified Data Data Lake""
    The phrase ""Unsecured / Unclassified Data Data Lake"" in the figure seems redundant. The word ""Data"" appears twice.
    Suggest: Change to ""Unsecured / Unclassified Data Lake"" for clarity ""Semantic Reference Model (SRM)"" appears in the figure but is missing in the text.
    The figure includes ""Native Integrated / X-Domain / Semantic Reference Model (SRM) / Curated / ... Data Formats,"" but the text does not reference SRM.
    Suggest: Suggestion: Either add a reference to SRM in the text or remove it from the figure if it is not relevant to this section.
    ""Data Discovery Services"" vs. ""Publishing data assets""
    The text refers to ""Publishing data assets using federated data catalogs,"" while the figure includes ""Data Discovery Services.""
    Suggest: Align terminology—if they refer to the same concept, use consistent wording.
    ""Security Services (ICAM, ABAC, Crypto, Key Mgt, monitoring, logging...)""
    This label in the figure may need clarification—does it represent part of the Secure Data Service
    or an independent function? The text does not explicitly reference ICAM, ABAC, or Crypto in
    this section."

  • Reported: IEF-RA 2.0a1 — Thu, 14 Aug 2025 15:54 GMT
  • Updated: Thu, 14 Aug 2025 15:54 GMT