IEFRA2 — Repetitive Wording & Awkward Sentence Construction

"19. Section: 1.10.3 IEF Alignment with Cloud Security Practices
19.1 Spelling & Grammar Issues:
● No outright spelling errors.
19.1.1 Repetitive Wording & Awkward Sentence Construction
Sentence: ""The IEF explicitly treats data as a resource – a pillar of ZTA. As illustrated in Figure 4, the IEF As illustrated (Figure 4), the IEF-RA separates the data from all users (e.g., individuals, applications, systems, and devices) from the data assets.""
Suggest: The phrase ""As illustrated in Figure 4"" is repeated unnecessarily. The second sentence also has awkward phrasing (""the IEF As illustrated (Figure 4), the IEF-RA..."").
""The IEF explicitly treats data as a resource—one of the core pillars of Zero Trust Architecture (ZTA). As shown in Figure 1.10-2, IEF-RA separates data from users (e.g., individuals, applications, systems, and devices), ensuring security policies are enforced at the data level, independent of the infrastructure."""