IEFRA2 — IEF Alignment with Data-Centric Security

"17. Section: 1.10.1 IEF Alignment with Data-Centric Security
17.1 Spelling & Grammar Issues:
Sentence: ""Standards-based guarding capability for data and information exchange based on the bound confidentiality labels""
Suggest: ""guarding capability"" might be unclear.
""Standards-based security enforcement for data and information exchange based on the bound confidentiality labels.""
Sentence: ""The PEP and PPS each provide guarding functions.""
Suggest: Guarding functions"" is vague.
""Suggestion: ""The PEP and PPS each enforce access control and data protection functions.""
Sentence: ""The IEF PEP guard is based on the metadata values bound to the object or message.""
Suggest: ""PEP guard"" is not a standard phrase.
""The IEF PEP enforces security based on the metadata values bound to the object or message.
Sentence: ""Security accredited standards-compliant systems""
Suggest: Proper compound adjective usage ""Security-accredited, standards-compliant systems""
Sentence: ""Beyond the scope of the IEF-RA. Security Assessment and Authorization (SA&A) is a process the user performs to accredit an information system or service to operate.""
Suggest: Sentence fragment.
""This is beyond the scope of the IEF-RA. Security Assessment and Authorization (SA&A) is a user-driven process for accrediting an information system or service.
Sentence: ""An IEF-RA implementation can interface with Identity, Credential, Access Management (ICAM), and access control (e.g., ABAC and RBAC) services through the Security Services Gateway or PEP.""
Suggest: ""Identity, Credential, Access Management (ICAM)"" is incorrect. Should be ""Identity, Credential, and Access Management (ICAM)"".
Sentence: Likely meant to be
""Use of cryptographic mechanisms and key management."""