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DDSRPC_ — Editorial corrections in the spec document

  • Key: DDSRPC_-7
  • Status: closed  
  • Source: Real-Time Innovations ( Sumant Tambe)
  • Summary:

    The following content is a subset of DDSRPC-1 issue reported by Remedy.

    Document (mars/14-11-02)
    Section 4
    reference to CORBA should be updated to CORBA v3.3
    reference to IDL should be updated to CORBA v3.3
    reference for DDS4CCM lacks document number
    reference for DDS-Cxx-PSM and DDS-Java-PSM should be updated to the formal version
    reference to github, how can we in the future pinpoint the exact version of the files mentioned, shouldn't the reference be more explicit about which version?
    reference to IDL 3.5 is lacking (used in section 8.3.1)
    Section 5
    Shouldn't there be a reference in section 4 for this quote?
    Section 8.1
    The spec talks about “communication patterns”, but in the context of UCM we are talking about “interaction patterns”, what about adopting the UCM term?
    Section 8.2.1
    Second paragraph, the fact that a content-based filter “is” used forces that everyone must do this (which is the most logical implementation), but shouldn't it be “could”
    In the second paragraph its says “the service implementation contains a data reader to read the method name”, but shouldn't it be “the service implementation contains a data reader which receives the request and after that reads the method name and the parameters.”

    Can't the diagram be placed after the first paragraph, it is now on the next page but we refer in text already to it).

    Third paragraph, at the end “are filtered out”.

    Section 8.2.3
    Isn't it better to keep the term “client” instead of introducing “requester”

    Section 8.2.5
    “ it is” instead of “It is”
    Use a reference to DDS-XTypes in the first paragraph, not in the 3rd
    Section xx

    Section xx
    The spec uses IDL anonymous types in some places, these are deprecated and prevented to our idea.
    Section 8.4
    “by the used,”??
    Reference error
    Reference error
    Space missing before “shall” on 3rd line

    Typo Non-noramtive

    Section 8.7.1
    Evolution should be evolution.
    Add a reference to where in this specification this language binding is provided

  • Reported: DDS-RPC 1.0b1 — Wed, 4 Nov 2015 18:01 GMT
  • Disposition: Resolved — DDS-RPC 1.0
  • Disposition Summary:

    Correction have been incorporated

    The suggested editorial corrections have been incorporated in the updated specification document.

  • Updated: Tue, 12 Jul 2016 14:44 GMT