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  1. OMG Issue

ALMAS16 — Errors, typos, and misspellings

  • Key: ALMAS16-6
  • Status: open  
  • Source: BAE SYSTEMS ( Mr. Simon Mettrick)
  • Summary:

    From William (Bill) Beavin's AB comments on ALMAS 1.5 RTF

    Clear spelling/typing errors
    • ALert in title and headers likely intentional branding, but should be confirmed.
    • alter requiring confirmation → should be alert.
    • specifys → specifies
    • handing is required → likely handling is required
    • nonull → non-null
    • AlertTemaplate → AlertTemplate
    • templateto → template to
    • constraind → constrained
    • specifc → specific
    • Dtaa Model → Data Model
    • TempalteIDSet → TemplateIDSet
    • mulit-language → multi-language
    • report and technical or editing issues → likely report any technical or editing issues
    • it is not generated should begin with It
    • 7.1to 7.3 → missing space: 7.1 to 7.3
    Grammar/style problems
    • Identified whether should be Identifies whether in AlertReport.
    • Class provided by registering... is awkward; several class descriptions need rewriting.
    • This is the ALMAS a general-purpose... is ungrammatical.
    • The receiver may decide to take an explicit action in mitigation to... should likely be in mitigation of.
    • through being handled / through being cancelled is awkward but understandable.
    • Several sentences are run-on or missing articles.
    Formatting and presentation issues
    • Section numbering spacing is inconsistent, e.g. 6.1.1ALMASNotificationListener, 6.3.1ALMASConfiguration.
    • Some tables appear malformed or partially corrupted.
    • Bullet formatting is inconsistent in multiple sections.
    • Some enum/value presentations use braces, some use prose, some use tables.
    • “This page intentionally left blank.” pages are present and fine, but surrounding pagination text is somewhat inconsistent.
    • Trademark symbol formatting is noisy in the title and front matter.
    Reference and cross-reference issues
    • Footnote [1] is cited in Section 4.2, but the footnote text formatting is weak and should be validated in final layout.
    • Section references are mostly present, but some wording like “later in this document” should be replaced by precise section references where possible.
    • GraphQL is cited to Facebook rather than the current stewardship context; not necessarily wrong, but worth verifying.
    • OTEL 1.38.0 is listed as a normative reference, but the document does not define clear conformance obligations tied to it.

  • Reported: ALMAS 1.4b1 — Sat, 21 Mar 2026 15:03 GMT
  • Updated: Wed, 8 Apr 2026 15:29 GMT