Source: Fujitsu ( Frederick Hirsch)
Please run spell checker on entire document.
I noticed the following spelling errors:
I assume ‘defence’ is the French spelling, I am familiar with ‘defense’. Thus 'defence-in-depth’ could be updated.
3.1 #11 change two typos, "IEF Reference Arcitecture FRP” to "IEF Reference Architecture RFP”
suggest adding informative reference for SAMSON:
6.7 replace in with is in UAF defintion last sentence
Annex A, Annex B (multiple instances)
"into e PPS” InfromationElementMetadata
Annex B - PPS Policies
Reported: IEF-RA 1.0b1 — Wed, 12 Jul 2017 16:48 GMT
Updated: Wed, 12 Jul 2017 19:19 GMT