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  1. OMG Issue

DDSIRTP23 — Editing issues

  • Key: DDSIRTP23-23
  • Legacy Issue Number: 16957
  • Status: open  
  • Source: OCI ( Adam Mitz)
  • Summary:

    1. Section:, Bullet 2 and Footnote 2
    Page: 43
    Change: PROTOCOL_RTPS is not defined by PSM

    2. Section:, Table 8.35
    Page: 50
    Change: KeyFlag is missing from the table

    3. Section:, Table 8.35
    Page: 51
    Change: Remove the line "Present only if DataFlag is set in the header", as DataFrag has no such flag. Remove the line "Present only if either the DataFlag or the KeyFlag are set in the header", as DataFrag has no DataFlag. In the first bullet point replace "If the DataFlag is set" with "If the KeyFlag is not set".

    4. Section: 8.4.1
    Page: 63
    Change: Section 8.4.13 (Writer Liveliness) is missing from this list.

    5. Section:
    Page: 75
    Change: The paragraph above the table should be changed from using Locator_t to ReaderLocator (the table was changed in a previous revision).

    6. Section:,
    Page: 76
    Change: Locator_t in these sections should be ReaderLocator

    7. Section:, Table 8.51
    Page: 77
    Change: In figure 8.15, type of locator is Locator_t[*] but the [*] is missing from this table (8.51) and the text should reflect the actual cardinality

    8. Section:
    Page: 93
    Change: The sentence fragment "Submessages are used..." is nonsensical, it should be removed.

    9. Section:, Figure 8.29
    Page: 129
    Change: Remove figure 8.29, it is a duplicate of figure 8.28

    10. Section:, block diagram
    Page: 170
    Change: Flag "K" is missing from the flags byte

    11. Section:
    Page: 180
    Change: The wire-representation diagram is missing the participantGuidPrefix and kind fields (also see OMG Issue 12501)

    12. Section:, Table 9.10
    Page: 182
    Change: remoteWriterGuid belongs to WriterProxy, not ReaderProxy

    13. Section:, Table 9.10
    Page: 182
    Change: Table 9.10 caption is incorrect, looks like it was copied from 9.11

    14. Section:, Table 9.16
    Page: 190
    Change: KeyHashSuffix does not exist; remove this row from the table. The row for SerializedData should be sufficient to describe the use of PID_COHERENT_SET.

  • Reported: DDSI-RTPS 2.0b1 — Tue, 27 Dec 2011 05:00 GMT
  • Updated: Fri, 12 Jan 2018 22:05 GMT